5 W Poem Drafts

What is a 5 W Poem?

5 W Poem includes five lines:

line 1--Who or What is the poem about?

line 2--What is the action?

line 3--When does the action take place?

line 4--Where?

line 5--Why?

Draft 1

The sea gull

floats slowly

in the red evening sunset

softly down upon the glassy water

resting from a day of soaring.

Draft 2

Five laughing kids

race through the lawn sprinkler

on a blazingly hot summer afternoon

under the tree's canopy

to cool down in the sweltering heat.